Wednesday, April 21, 2010

A short Poem

Honesty in all earnesty,
Passion in love and life,
Hardwork and modesty,
For value of life we strive.

Intelligent design and believe,
believe that hope drowns sorrow,
We shall if we need stay naive,
and hope that there's a better tomorrow.

And we shall hold these words in our heart,
from now until the end of day,
till soul and body chooses to part,
forever I promise these word will stay.


-Hanafee Abdul Rahman-

3 comments:

Sabrina said...

1. is "earnesty" a word? it sounds real...hehe

2. there are times we have to reserve our honesty... what do u think?

3. what does "we shall if we need stay naive?" mean?

Mouse said...

Poetry is hard for me to like. But this is good. It's got a nice form to it. It makes you think. Everything I think fo when I think of a poem.
Very spiritually uplifting. ty.

Mouse said...

I enjoyed this. Normally poetry that doesn't follow the traditional form is all over the place, but this was well thought out and very uplifting. Made me think, too. ty for this.